I really enjoyed reading this so thank you. I think your version is superior. Two face is such an interesting character it would be great to see more of his backstory in the movie. Also Robin Williams as Mr freeze is brilliant. He was able to play obsessed/violent in One Hour Photo so he would be very convincing in that role. I totally agree about Jim Carrey too. Now I have to rewatch.
Thank you for posting this you are correct the fee goes to the restaurant and they use the money to pay the back of house. In my experience it is just so the restaurant can provide the same wages as before to back of house but not out of the restaurants pocket. This tends to result in people tipping less so the server directly makes less money. There is also often no accounting/oversight into how the restaurant uses the fee. If I recall correctly the city of Los Angeles is looking into the legality of how these fees are presented to the customer and the fact there is no oversight.
Thank you for posting this! I watched it after reading your post and it is my favorite movie I’ve seen all year.