Aspergarian Lust Letters
Aspergarian Lust Letters
I sent this to a friend. She's a normie. I'm an Aspie. I wonder what other Normies think.
I feel that my writing is kind of technical. It's how I think. I'm just not sure what I could do to make it less technical.
(At this point I just just sent her a very welcome picture of my bed warmed cock that I took this morning.)
Imagine that, in some future, we had spent some time kissing, and hugging. I had spent some time licking and sucking your nipples while squeezing your breasts. I had made my way down to run my tongue from the bottom of one lip to the top, then from the bottom of the other lip to the top before sliding my tongue as far inside you as a could then up and over and around your clit. I had slipped two fingers inside you and gently stroked the front wall of your pussy while I worked your clit with my tongue and lips.
Then, I sat up took your hand, and pulled you up. I pulled you toward me and kissed you and you lowered your head and took my cock in your mouth, enjoying its thickness and the salty sweet precum that oozed out. Then, I put my hands under your chin and pulled your face to mine. I put my arm around your and pulled you to me and you slid into my lap with your legs around me. You felt my glistening cock head brush your lips then slip between them brushing against your clit. I put my arm around you and pull your chest against me kissing you deeply as you felt the head of my cock find your pussy.
You take a deep breath as we kiss, tighten your legs around my back, and feel the full length of my cock side deep inside you. I reach for your ass pulling you into my cock and pressing it as deep inside you as I can, holding that position while you press your breasts into my chest as we kiss passionately.
Do you have a Southern US accent?
as deep inside you as a can
Lol
God damn it. I proofread it, too.
I like it. Sure, maybe it's a bit more on the mechanical/technical side of describing the act. You could also describe the character's emotions and how these things make them feel. But it's not that obvious in such a short text. I think if you had given me that without a disclaimer, I wouldn't have guessed it's by someone who isn't considered to be a normie...
Especially in the realm of erotica and pornographic stories, there are so many perspectives on things, fetishes and really outstanding things people like and focus on... The word "normal" kind of looses its meaning here.
There are guides on how to write erotica. It's more focused to describe a scene than other kinds of fiction anyways. And I mean general tipps on storywriting apply if you want it to sound professional. Use past tense, choose a perspective from which the story is told, have a central theme and something that develops the narrative and characters and goes somewhere. But if you're just doing it for you, you can skip all of these and just do whatever makes you happy. Except for consent of involved parties, there aren't many rules to sexuality. There is some pressure by society, but in the end we all have to find out what we like and do that.
Thanks for the comments. I was asking her to imagine the setup right up until the last paragraph. Everything up to that point was leading up to the last paragraph. The letter was about the kiss and the penetration. She may come back and ask me what happens next. She most often does.
I agree with your comments about, "normal". People with Asperger's, at least those that I am close with, tend to see Asperger's as a superpower rather than as any kind of deficit. We prefer to be direct and honest which "normies" see as a problem because it makes them uncomfortable.
I reached out to a long lost acquaintance who used to like receiving pictures of my cock. I told her that I had lost weight and was measuring over 7 inches. She asked for a picture. I teased a little bit but did eventually send her one. She asked a question which could have been a hint but I took it as not being one. Then another that could have been a hint but I took it as not being one. Later, after I made a delivery an hour from home and had time to think while driving, I went back and said, "I have Asperger's which means that I don't understand hints or subtle social clues. If this question was a hint and actually meant, 'Have you thought about fucking me?' the answer would be, 'Yes.'". I explained that she didn't have to hint with me. She replied, 'Ok, if you don't like hints, I have thought about sucking your cock. What now?" We have a date at a hotel next Wednesday. The Aspie way is so much easier.
Hehe, glad it turned out quite alright for you. I guess there might be a happy ending to that story/letter. And now I get the context of your writing.
I also really like people who are direct an honest. If it were up to me, we could skip most of the clues and hinting at things. I mean if we're trying to convey something to another human being we can make a deliberate choice to either make it simple and just say what's on our mind, or make it a riddle for them to solve. I like the first approach and I think it would be to the benefit of everyone if people chose to do it that way.
Ultimately your situation is a bit different anyways... I wouldn't dare to ask a random person for sex, it would be wrong. But if you're already sending dick pics and talking about your cock... ¯_(ツ)_/¯ You can probably skip the social etiquette and speak your mind. They're the right person to be honest with, or they would have ran away way earlier. (My opinion)
