Dad Jokes @lemmy.world Usernameblankface @lemmy.world 2y ago Have you been to garage sales? Like several in a row? I tried garage sailing once, but it sank. Some diver is going to be so confused.
Hmm, that would be a good addition."I heard about garage sailing. I tried it out one day at the local lake. Turns out, they're not as buoyant as they look." Something to avoid "sank" or "sunk." Both of those seem wrong right there.
Get rid of that middle sentence."I heard about garage sailing. Turns out, they're not as buoyant as they look"
i think i would try and fit 'they are not as buoyant as they look' in there somewhere
Hmm, that would be a good addition.
"I heard about garage sailing. I tried it out one day at the local lake. Turns out, they're not as buoyant as they look."
Something to avoid "sank" or "sunk." Both of those seem wrong right there.
Get rid of that middle sentence.
"I heard about garage sailing. Turns out, they're not as buoyant as they look"