The dices are mangled, and the perspective of the white one is flipped from that of the book. I knew something felt wrong but could'nt put my finger on it while drawing.
Thank you, I agree the binding is okay. That's what I enjoy about inktober. The drawing don't need to be perfect, each ones I did I found something to like in, and learned from the mistakes. It's all about putting XP's in the drawing skill.
Note, it's white pen and a touch of gray brush pen.